WOW!Really,those incidences were so gorgeously written,you could feel the hurt and hate there!Beautiful work!

Kaye, this was the most beautiful thing I've ever read!

Remmius is just &hearts one of my greatest OTPs and you wrote them brilliantly!

The first paragraph was just beautibeautibeautiful! Really, I died already then. &hearts

Then the second, it teared me up, gosh.

"may have hated him because Sirius' lips were always at his ear, whispering burning secrets to him and Remus always caved" ahshjahavjks &hearts

In the fourth, this was so perfect, how you wrote the canon stuff, you know. ;)

And number 5, the last words, they were so painful and so beautiful and so filled of emotions.

6 was just agshagahsjf.

Same with seven, those two were so filled with love, pure, raw feelings. Your writing, Kaye, your writing.

8 killed me. &hearts

9 killed me more. "murmuring I love you. Remus hates him. (No, he doesn't.)" &hearts &hearts

And ten killed me again. "It's the way Remus fit perfectly around his body, warm and secure, and how he'd whisper, I love you into his ear" &hearts &hearts &hearts

Sorry about this review and its non-making sense. But I loved this so ***** much, Kaye.

my goodness. i was never one for remussirius, but your story was achingly gorgeous. the words are so well-placed and the emotion is so incredibly profound. i figure by this time i won't have any suitable adjectives to describe how lovely this fic was. most of all, i love the dynamic of their relationship - how they both hurt and loved each other so much.

That was really good, very sad and emotional :)

Liked it :)

I would like to translate it into german, if you agree?