|Reviews for The Betrayal|
| AwsomeWierdo 4/5/13 . chapter 1
it was good, you confused me at the beginning though
| Nika Nicolette 3/30/13 . chapter 1
Hahaha oh my gosh ! Most epic wat fight ever! Haha
| Riku97 1/6/13 . chapter 1
Love it! Its something that I could see happening.
| BookLover342 1/1/13 . chapter 1
Yes, join the dark side. We have Annabeth and Evalyn :D
| Reflections of Twilight 8/30/12 . chapter 1
I don't even know how I got here... But good job! :)
| Youcouldcallmescaryifyoudared 6/19/12 . chapter 1
This is probably the funniest story I have EVER read! The beginning is really grabbing and the end is enough to make a reader want more. Once again, this is a great story, just like all your other stories.
| Joanne K. Riordan 4/21/12 . chapter 1
Me: *Reading first 17 sentences* *sobs uncontrollably*
*Reads next line* What the #$! ?
*Continues reading* Laughs at story and own stupidity*
Yeah, should have looked at the genre before reading :P :D
| godessgirl23 4/18/12 . chapter 1
That was hilarous'
| Lalalalala 3/29/12 . chapter 1
I wouldn't have read this if I weren't so completely bored out of my mind. Summaries are a must. They, quite frankly, are not that hard. You could've said, "Betrayal hurts... And is icy cold." Or something really simply like that that wouldn't give anything away and are also new, original, and eye catching.
| cookiesforlove 3/29/12 . chapter 1
LOL I loved it!I thought it was gonna be like, one of the intense stories. But this was so freaking awesome! Cake?
| magicdemi-god223 3/27/12 . chapter 1
It was a WATer FIGHT! ?asfklasdjkla
| Red-White Roses 3/25/12 . chapter 1
The fist few sentences sounded like she actually did... u know... anyway, that was hilarious!
| dff 3/13/12 . chapter 1
haha the appolos
| SugarIsHEALTHY 2/14/12 . chapter 1
hahaha this was so funny!... and random but those are the best stories :)
| Flygrrl 1/27/12 . chapter 1