You need to update thiss aaaah! The suspense! This is fab,please update I need more :D

y u no write more ;_;

No, but seriously, this had me really interested! You should DEFINITELY write more soon!

Its really funny. The only other Looking for Alaska ff I've read has a girl named GEMMA in it, and my name is EMMA. lovely. :)

I enjoyed this chapter, and am looking forward to the rest of the story. My only complaint is that you have some minor typos and grammar errors, so you should consider proofreading it carefully or getting a beta reader.

Other than that, please continue writing.