Poor Fred-I would've never thought that Alicia would commit suicide...it's cuz of that cloud thing, right?

ENter Draco Malfoy...boy, this is really something-it's a really good story, that's what it is!

do I see some foreshadowing? Is the Cloud the key to destroying Voldie? Probably not, it's just a wild guess born of-well, I don't know.

This seems like a promising story, so I"m gonna skip off to the next chapter... good job! I'm gonna find out more about this mysterious 'Cloud'.

Now this was good, nice buildup of events. Loved the talking book. Keep going with it.

I like it so far yet, it's not Hermoine to become 'such a lady' since the Yule Ball she truely(my spelling is totally off) wasn't a lady unlass around her 'man' you should notice this in the 4th book. But they are also YOUR ideas. I like it alot though. Your ideas towards the characters make me want to read on. A only try to say little things. Yet, so far it is qiute good!

OOOOOOOOOOOO! Continue! QUICKLY! And thanx for ur review on Soul Mates! :-)

Thank you. That's much better. So how exactly ARE they going to stop it?

This is a great idea, but you jumped into it a little too quickly. If the first chapter was the teacher's conversation, and Hermoine overheard it, then the next chapter was the one you posted here, this would be perfect.