|Reviews for A Desire to Set Things Right|
| starboy454 2/22/13 . chapter 15
| Runecutter 2/7/13 . chapter 15
I like how you let them basically step on everything "normal" time travellers would think as basic precautions... do nothing to gain attention, play down your powers and abilities, evade witnesses and questions and so on... instead they enjoy to really live their life to the fullest and to hell with the details and the timeline! :D
That results in a fun story and some interesting "problems" they find themselves in... and probably would have gone on so when it would have been continued further.
| Runecutter 2/7/13 . chapter 13
LOL brilliant method of falsifying the study. After all it's probably true!
So... will Susan now be the fourth "Trio" member? I remember something about how you can't life through such an experience without becoming best friends ;)
| Runecutter 2/7/13 . chapter 12
The kid was ultimately murdered but first kidnapped for a ransom of IIRC 1 million dollar ... at a time where that meant more than today several billions...
I still love the story, the deathstick and parentage things were clean and harmless fun in my eyes, not game-breakers.
| TxA-GunFighter 1/13/13 . chapter 12
Another fine chapter.
| TxA-GunFighter 1/12/13 . chapter 11
| Dagger-Seishin 1/4/13 . chapter 15
looking interesting. can't wait for more!
| hummingpetal 11/20/12 . chapter 15
Very interesting! Please update soon!
| BooksAreMyVideogames 11/18/12 . chapter 15
Liar! It's been, like, a year, and you still haven't updated. :P
| EverydayMagic17 11/5/12 . chapter 2
Dang...I wish I could've entered puberty at an older mental age...Love the story so far
| PurpleBullet 10/26/12 . chapter 15
I love this story. I can't wait until you post the next chapter.
| harpotfan 9/3/12 . chapter 15
I see that it has been longer than a year since you have written any part of this story. Are you going to do anymore with it or are you dropping it. I think that the chapters are better the further along in the story that you go. I hope that you either start a re-write or finish it up.
| Guest 8/14/12 . chapter 3
I laugh. You've basically just paved a smooth road for them. no, just no.
| ElizabethAnneSoph 6/5/12 . chapter 15
WOW! When I found this story I wasn't sure if I wanted to read it or not but then when I started this morning I was near collapsing with laughter over more than one thing! And now I can say that I have never enjoyed a story more and I REALLY hope to see many more chapters coming up soon! This story is GENIOUS! Just an idea try and get it publish!
My deepest compliments on your story!
| HHrBeta-er 3/27/12 . chapter 15
This story is really good keep writing!