i like it

how can you leave us with such a cliffhanger? lol Great chapter, please continue this fic and update soon. Good job :o)

OMG Daniel! What happened to him? Btw I love it, and I'm waiting for Part 2. :)

How could you stop here? Ending it on a head wound with a cricket bat? I did not find it too sappy and was looking froward to the long conversation with mrs. Meade (one of my favorite characters fromt he show, by the way). I knew the scary guy had to come back because there really would not have been a point to having him there in the first place, but this story as it stands should not be in the "complete" category if there is going to be such an obvious cliff hanger.