wow, that was a really really good poem!

that was so good

I dig. But, I don't know... I geuss I need more poetic and stager words to express Neo. But, I like it! Check out my poems some time! keep it up! God bless- *fael tinu*

nice and poetic.

freaky. i never thought about it that way. huh... im gonna go try bend spoons now (its not really there its not really there...) hehe. cool.

Very flowing poetry! I almost stopped reading, until the right time, you caught my attention again! All true poets should be able to have that ability. Use it well.

Not bad, not bad at all. It reads to me... well, almost like song lyrics, really, more than straight poetry. I like it.

Ooooh! good. I'm such a sucker for poetry. I