 Marxbros 3/30/02 . chapter 1DNA, very nice prequel. I really enjoyed the conversation between Galen and Commodus...I never thought of how Commodus learned where to stab Maximus, and I have never seen it done in a fanfic before. This was really interesting and well done. It's so good I'd like to see more...do Maeve and Nemhyn ever meet Galen? I'd like to see the doctor's ideas about women change :-) This was lovely, very nice work! -M |
 Vanessa 3/30/02 . chapter 1 Amazing prequel, DNA. No doubt you've put much time and energy into research and polishing the story, becaus they show. I've always liked how you worked in real historical figures-and Galen's cameo is perfectly delightful. His lie definitely explains how Maximus could have survived. Good work! |