This story is so much win. I was smiling and giggling the whole time I read it. All the characterization is very good. I love the choice of Lunamon for her digimon, I think it fits with the digimetal of dreams (I also now understand the title of the story). It's been a couple months since you updated, but I really hope you intend to continue with this story. It's so good it would be a shame to let it die so early on.

This was amazing. Your sense of humor is great, I was seriously laughing out loud. Rikku is definitely not a mary sue.

I didn't think she was mary-sueish at all. I like the whole family, the interaction between the father, the twins, and Rikku was great.

Kyaaa Love this story! I'm so glad I found it! I can't wait to see how this develops - Rikku is such an awesome character and her interaction with the rest of the characters is so great! Your other side OCs are well-developed as well, and the personalities of all of the canon characters is spot-on. I'm really enjoying how you animate Davis; his and Rikku's interaction makes me laugh.

I also enjoy Lunamon's personality. The whole personal attendant sort of attitude is really cute, her little jokes making for a lovable quirk. And with the way she pretty much attaches to Rikku's face, I can already tell they're gonna make a really good pair.

I eagerly await an update. :) This is one of the best season rewrite fics I've read, and it's not often you find one for 02 worth giving a second glance. The way you narrate, twist the canon dialogue, and describe make it very enjoyable and easy to read and visualize.

-KH

Update soon! I do wish to know who Rikku will be paired with :3

Awesome! This story is effing brilliant! not to mention I love your main character! she has spunk! I hope you update soon! i'm rooting for you ;)

Great chapter! I love the lunamon on the head bit really funny.

You seriously don't want to know how much I spazzed when I saw the alert for this in my inbox. I'm happy it was a decently long chapter, and I laughed when Rikku's outfit was a dress because that's just terrible luck. :P

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awesome! though davis is a bit annpying at the beginning don't you think? thaan again it's davis so it is bound to happen. thanks for the story and hope you update soon!

Duude! It's awesome! Please update!

Hey, I just looooove your story, can't wait to see more of it! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease update soon!

I just thought i would point out a contradiction in this story so far. Odaiba is an inner-city area of Tokyo, so someone coming from Tokyo to odaiba doesn't make sense. Maybe pick out another area of Tokyo e.g. Ueno or even mabe another city e.g. Kobe

This looks good so far keep it up! ;)

can't wait for her to meet Davis and the others! Those twins sound just evil lol I can't wait for more!