| Reviews for First Phase |
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BlackCatAnimeGirl 1/3/13 . chapter 1:) :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):) :D |
wolfeclipse25 7/13/12 . chapter 1How sad... Though I did enjoy reading this. |
the hotpocket hunter 6/25/12 . chapter 1This is a really good plot bunny. Are you going to continue it? I bet it would be really great! |
Perpetual Dreams 10/2/11 . chapter 1I really loved this one-shot! It was wonderfully written! |
Chibi-Onee-chan 7/2/11 . chapter 1I liked the way you wrote this. :) Though Takuto's first phase being possibly making others happy, I think your version seems to be more realistic. . I enjoyed reading this and I think it would make a good story if continued. ;3 |
Tri-Ni Sette01 7/2/11 . chapter 1It is a great pleasure for me to say hello, Tri-Ni Sette01 your services. I took the liberty of reading your fic, and I must say it's been great, I'm a little disappointed to learn that only one One Shot, as the story promised for more, but it's great. Sincerely been spectacular to read it, is the type of issues that I like, and if you are right the first phase of Takuto stay in the air with your order number wounded, the truth I could not believe the words of the final Wako on this issue, I doubt that the first phase was Tauburn Takuto's ability to make them happy, and although quite good theory, I tend more for yours. Congratulations indeed been great being able to read your one shot, so I do not want to take away longer, and be aware of your publications, for my part is all and many thanks for sharing such a great idea. Atte. Tri-Ni Sette01 |
mangosmoothie1 4/28/11 . chapter 1This is a great story. You shouldn't stop it there. Now, I imagined this at the end when Takuto save Sugata, but where you put it in the storyline was a good spot. |
Lyricalia 4/20/11 . chapter 1Oh my, how do I love this. It's not only very well written, it's exactly as I envisioned it, if not better. Yes, I had the same question, and wanted so much to see something like this in the series - but now you've made it and it couldn't be any better, thank you so much! Oh, oh oh, I really would like for this to be continued (dont'..know how it could, though, eek!), wishful thinking may it be, but oh I love it as an standalone too! Myyyy I loved Takuto resting on Sugata at the end, it made my night 3! Thank you! |
chris3169512 4/14/11 . chapter 1Beautifully written. If this were actually in the anime, I bet that it would've added angst to the entire series. o: Saving Sugata! But at the cost of Takuto's life? But if it were part of the anime, I'd probably be shrinking into a ball in front of the computer because Takuto's too awesome. D: Great job! I really enjoyed reading. Takuto's a trooper. Even if he's coughing up blood and stuff, he'd still fight to protect them. :) |