|Reviews for Company Picnic|
| cursivenight 6/17/11 . chapter 6
I really enjoyed this - it was well written, true to the characters, and entertaining. Thanks for sharing! )
| Bunny1 6/10/11 . chapter 6
Awwwww, such sweetness! I love it!
| LoveSomeTV 5/29/11 . chapter 6
Jimmy's a good guy. There should be more like him.
| TheSolarTwilight 5/10/11 . chapter 1
I love Raising Hope. I absolutely LOVE Jimbrina Jimmy/Sabrina.
| DaveDShow 5/3/11 . chapter 6
I felt so bad for Bethany because I've been where she is. That;s how real you made her to me. Hopefully, everything will be all right for her. :) And for Jimmy, too; little Hope has to be his first concern, and I like seeing the bond they have together. Beyond that, maybe Sabrina will, maybe she won't, but that's the choice Jimmy made, and now we'll see how it eventually plays out. A good story, with Burt & Virginia supportive as always(it's good to see a young man get along with his parents), and crazy- $$ Maw Maw doing her thing(lol).
| twiniitowers 5/2/11 . chapter 6
Marla, That was the end? When you said you were done with this I thought that meant you had 4 or 5 chapters left in your document manager. **Baby Hope is the cutest**...Beth's letter was beautifully written. I'm still new to watching the show and haven't seen all of the episodes yet. "Raising Hope" is a good show. Cute story. Good job. :)
| TL22 5/2/11 . chapter 6
Well that was interesting. I understood it a lot better after I watched a few shows. As always very well written. You had several humorous incidents Which had me laughing even thought I was not quite sure what I was laughing at. It took me to the last chapter to realized that Bethany was your character and not one from the show.
I thoroughly enjoyed the story and as always am looking forward to your next story
| buddygirl1004 5/1/11 . chapter 6
Aww this story was so great! Too bad it's over, please write mire stories!
| Princesakarlita411 5/1/11 . chapter 6
| DaveDShow 4/27/11 . chapter 5
What fun! On a serious note, Jimmy probably still can't help but feel a little twinge for Sabrina, but the evidence is right there in front of him. Fortunately, Beth understands and is right there to encourage him to get on with his life. Now, back to the merriment. Javier getting roped into fanning Maw Maw-and her proving totally unappreciative-was exretemely funny. Burt & Virginia proved that their love can overcome any temporary difficulties or spats; they're both good role models for Jimmy and little Hope(though it was funny when Hope tried to say "balloons" and Jimmy's feelings about the way it came out). And that was a very nice kiss between Jimmy and Beth. Interesting that Sabrina averted her gaze at that.
| swordsintoplowshares 4/25/11 . chapter 1
Thanks so much for creating a new love interest for Jimmy. He's been doting on Sabrina so much... it's honestly becoming a bit platonic for me. Plus, who can resist the allure of shy chubby outcast turned unrecognizable, charming coworker cutie! Thanks! I WILL keep reading! I hope there is some crazy Maw Maw mischief coming up in the next part! I have to confess though, Burt is my fav!
| buddygirl1004 4/24/11 . chapter 5
Yay! Great chappie! Awww hopes talking! She's so darn cute we Just want to eat her up!
Can't wait till next chappie!
| twiniitowers 4/24/11 . chapter 5
Marla, Hope is the cutest baby on TV! I loved the "loons" for a minute there I thought she was referring to her grandparents and not an actual balloon. ;) She won the race! I'm surprised that you added Wyatt. I liked him a little until the show had him purposely drive in the wrong lane to get Sabrina to listen to him. Maw Maw's comment about Barcelona was funny. Good job. :) Update soon.
| TL22 4/24/11 . chapter 5
Well I watched a couple of episodes of this show. All I can say is your totally on track. The show is insane. So is your story. So therefore it is very good.
Now at least I know what I am laughing at.
| Princesakarlita411 4/23/11 . chapter 5