Awws! Cute story, you got Mina perfectly :)

Wow, you write really well! It was super cute in my opinion you know? We know she considered him when she first went to meet Pher, so its nice that you made it as if she needs him right now and that she's not really ready for a relationship. In character and very very emotional and cute! Loved it!

Ahh! Loved the Holly Golightly reference at the end! Great story! I love these two so much!

Nice take - I loved the ending, and I would love to see the show come back with Mina and Tommy. They have great potential. In the meantime, you simply have to write more stories to keep us occupied :-)

Thanks very much,

K.

absolutely loved it. that is all.