|Reviews for Beneath Equestria|
| Guest 3/5/13 . chapter 1
| Endam 8/6/11 . chapter 2
| nightmaster000 6/27/11 . chapter 2
this is pretty good i like it
| Greki 4/30/11 . chapter 2
I really can't wait to see the continuation of this!
| enderverse 4/18/11 . chapter 2
Nopony expects the Equestrian Inquisition!
| Kindom Rider92 4/18/11 . chapter 1
I've got to say, this is a pretty good story. I can't believe I've gotten into My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic myself, but I'm glad I did.
Okay, this is pretty exciting. The group on an epic underground adventure to find the remnants of an ancient civilization that fled Nightmare Moon, believing the surface to be lost. When they get there, they meet Radiant, who is the leader of the civilization which the main cast quickly discovers to be totalitarian. Rainbow Dash and Applejack's poor choice of words and timing pretty much screws up any hopes of establishing diplomatic relations, and now, the group's accused of heresy and espionage, and next chapter's going to be an attempt at a public execution- I say attempt as it's too early to begin killing off the main characters and getting away with it. Do I have this right, so far?
Now, I have a few questions: What happened to that filly? And what kind of execution style do you have planned?
I'm looking forward to it. Kingdom Rider92, out!
| TehThunder 4/18/11 . chapter 2
Oooh, great chapter! Radiant is a very interesting character.
| OmNomNomingNid 4/12/11 . chapter 1
... there's gonna be drow ponies, isn't there?