WHOA. This was awesome. I love how he's so deliberately...hunting her. And yet, for unusual reasons. There's so much tension in this fic, such deliberation, from both Elena and Elijah. I want more of this universe, please. Instant fave!

I love this so much! I'd love to see more, it's beautiful

I really enjoyed this!

Love this story so much. It explores their relationship so well. You're an amazing writer :) I really hope you update your other story soon and continue to write more Elena/Elijah stories!

Again, so good.

I am loving this! I actually started reading Taken prior to finding this. I am still in the middle of that one. I like to reserve my reviews on completed stories until the end. Having read this...it all leads up to Taken so beautifully. I think you are incredibly talented in keeping with the tone of the show and it's characters. That is hard to find in the world of fan fic. You write like you are a part of the team of writers that bring us Vampire Diaries weekly. No joke. I am so impressed. I have just recently developed a fixation on the chemisty between Elena and Elijah. I am now a full blown Elenjah shipper. I am finding good Elena/Elijah stories are very hard to come by. So, I am so grateful to you, that you are using your talent to reach the fringes (like me) in the VD universe. You have me completely hooked! Are you open to writing more Elena/Elijah fics? I would be indebted to you! Thanks.

PERFECT.

Oh YOU'RE SUCH A GREAT AUTHOR AND YOUR STORIES ARE PERFECT!

I like the plot but you need to choose a tense and stick with it. You keep flitting from present tense to past tense when Elena's thinking or speaking, I would recommend past tense. 'She lead Elijah down toward the living room' sounds better than 'She leads Elijah down toward the living room. :)

I absolutely love this story. Not only is it EXTREMELY well-written, but you also managed to keep everyone in character, even Caroline and Bonnie. That does NOT happen often on fanfiction, and for me it's always a moment of victory whenever I find a story like this :)

On a side note, I also enjoyed this story because I am an Elijah/Elena shipper. As much as I love the Salvatore brothers, there's just something about these two that really works. It's like...they're equals. Even though he's thousands of years older than Elena, they seem to have a deep understanding of one another. You can't ignore that-no one can! I mean, heck, just watch episode 19 of season 2. If you deny that there is chemistry between them in that episode, then there is seriously something wrong with you. Heck, even Daniel Gillies admitted that there is an undeniable connection between Elijah and Elena. He's "fascinated" by Elena, or so he said in an interview, and it will probably be impossible for him to leave her alone for too long. Well, they have to pull that dagger out of his chest first, but they will. You know they will :)

Anyway, you portrayed Elijah and Elena's relationship beautifully, and I really wish that you would continue. Maybe you could write another one? Or have you already done so? I'm DEFINITELY going to check...anyhoo, you rock! Keep it up.

my gosh I love this story especially the part when he healed her instead of getting stabbed I sooo wanted that to happen instead. plsss continue this as a story or start something similar with the same pairing, keep up the good work

Nicely written. I hope you write more!

This was just spot on. You wrote each character, even the minor ones such as Caroline and Bonnie, just beautifully- however, your portrayal of Elijah and Elena just breathes the right way. They're an odd and intriguing couple- you kept this feeling at the forefront by really teasing the readers as to what Elijah's feelings towards Elena are. Very sexy. I would love to see some more Elejah from you!

Dang. That was excellent! I didn't expect him to be manipulating her at all, the ending came as quite a shock! I'd love to see a twist on this ending that follows the most recent episodes.

This was so good :) You totally need to continue it! And especially now that Elijah is alive again in the show you could incorporate that into this :) But yeah, I loved this 3