Imagining Sebastian working at Wal-Mart made my day, and the rest of the fic made my week. I will now hop to the next story in this series *hops away*

i love it! they are too cute!

oh my gosh. this is AMAZING (as usual)!

when i read the reviews, thinking of sebastian working for a fast food restaurant kind of...urm...disturbed me. but once i started reading the story, i can't help but gape at how utterly creative this was. i mean, i would have never thought of it (as is usually the case...*sweatdrop*).

the part with grelle and william was hilarious! kind of made me feel sorry for the turned-green sebastian (as a matter of fact, i felt a bit green myself, too. and not in the jealous sort of way. *shudders*). but i loved the hilarious conversations, the hot scenes, and the fact that all these twists and turns spanned in a 24-hour period. kind of like a journal.

i do wonder about the whole "kill-a-demon" thing that ciel was musing over. but i guess i'll see to that in a later chapter? oh wait. i don't see the "next chapter" button. darn it. now that i think of it, the story did say it was complete. double darn it.

well, overall, i'll give this story a rating of 11 out of 10. AMAZING JOB!

How in the HELL does this only have ELEVEN reviews? You deserve more than that lol Yeah It'll take some getting use to the fact that Sebby works in retail/a waffle house...eh...haha but it's all good it contributes to the fact that desperate times call for desperate measures, right? :) GAH anyways the whole grellxWill thing at the table was hilarious. I just love your Grelle's dialogue! And oh, the oblivious finny and pestering Ron! That master needs to be eaten. Now. Lol And ommggg. The cielxsebastian stuff was gorgeous. And the ending...your endings are SO masterful! Everything always comes full circle and when I read your stories, it's poetry. Gahh. Ur amazing.

Amusing

Hm? I thought he already proposed on "Five Thousand"...?

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I love this fic but 1 thing gets on my nerves. HOW COULD U MAKE SABASTIAN WORK AT A WAFFLE HOUSE OR WAL-MART, HES BETTER THAN THAT. AT LEAST MAKE HIM WORK AT A FANCY RESTERAUNT. But other than that great fic

"You would complain that souls were too slippery on their own," Sebastian reminisced with a smirk, expression glowing with the same rosy fondness of a parent who was recollecting on their child's early years. "Or that they were too big and difficult to swallow if I didn't first grind them up for you. You'd throw tantrums and sulk when I'd reprimand you about acting like a spoiled baby bird."

awww,can u fanficcing this timeline,please? xDDD

I must wonder though, did grell ever get his sex change so he's now a real woman? since last time I checked, he was a 'male' or a very flat chested female. its ironic that sebastian found a ring that was very similar to the original ring ciel wore when he was alive. hahaha I love the romeo and juliet joke, as well as the other uses of sarcasm. cute ending though!

I absolutely love this world you have created in the bicenntineal stories. It's so vivid and beautiful and believable. I would be eternally grateful if you kept up this series. You are so wonderful and your writing is so inspiring. Thank you so much for sharing these with us.

I absolutely love this world you have created in the bicenntineal stories. It's so vivid and beautiful and believable. I would be eternally grateful if you kept up this series. You are so wonderful and your writing is so inspiring. Thank you so much for sharing these with us.

This Bicentennial universe is really amazing. And adorable. I was alternating between smiling and laughing so hard at this fic - Finny is so moe and Ronald is so fun to read about and GRELL. OMG. I think Grell is the star of this fic :3

Thank you for the very awesome fic :3

so sweet! they are together but that master!

I adore this universe so much, you have no idea. I am completely enamored with the idea of them being happy, and Grell and Will being married, and Ronald just randomly showing up and crashing, and Finny...!

I am rather curious about Ciel's master, though. It would be interesting to see the completion of the contract, since between this and Five Thousand, it ends. That man seems like the sort to try and get out of a deal with the devil...

It was amazing, as always!

Li

Another amazing story written! I must say how much I enjoyed this one after reading the previous two in the Bicenntial collection:)

After writing touching on so many dark aspects in previous stories of Sebastain's and Ciel's relationship, this complimented them nicely:)

Wish you the best for future stories!