This is beautiful and I was so heartbroken when I learned about Keiko's death. I love that you wrote this in Jessie's POV. Your writing is wonderful and you did an amazing job with this! You've inspired me to write a Free Willy story of my own!

Hey i liked the story although i dont like sad endings. It was hard to follow because the beginning really didn't plot the story. Also I was confused about the end, so did he die in the water?

Wont lie i shed some tears. I loved these movies when i was little! Really liked it.

:'( This was sooo sad; short, but sad enough it made me cry; totally not lying. I love the Free Willy movies; they were my inspiration for choosing Marine Biology as a career. I remember watching the first movie ever and just falling in love with them. You could've gone further with this but in a way I'm glad you didn't; it was sad enough.

I loved it! It nearly made me cry.

Heart-touch. Deep. And true.

Thank you for sharing this.