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scarlettmeadows 5/16/12 . chapter 12
I am in love! This story deserves 2000 reviews...it's amazing! Keep up the awesome writing!
Ppsh 5/5/12 . chapter 3
Wow, Harry sure is an angsty faggot. Crying just because he enters a burnt down house... lmao. He wouldn't even have any memory of it.

A convergence of annoying factors here makes this almost unbearable to read. First is that Harry just had an angst overload tantrum attack for no reason. Second, this Adele girl is a classic mary sue if ever there was one. Third, half-vampires are nonsense and make no sense. Fourth, bonds are a terribly cliche plot device. Five, Malfoys ploy makes such little sense that I am left wondering what was going through your head. What was the point of complex runes and etc when he could have just done Avada Kedavra and got it over with, with zero chance of failure. He could have just tortured him into insanity. Instead he sends him back to the one place that could help him...

Sixth, you've got problems if you think even a Vampire would touch Snape lol. Seventh, Snape is completely OOC. He never compliments Harry in canon, yet here he pretty much gives him fatherly advice for no reason. Eight, there's no reason for this big hubbub about 'making the decision' if Vampires don't actually have bad lives. The whole point of Vampires is that they gain great strength and they also gain great disadvantages in the process. The need for human blood and need to avoid sunlight. Though you've not said it as of yet I'm assuming these are going to be some retarded abominations of original Vampire lore that can go in the sunlight with some sunscreen and just need a tiny bit of blood to survive.
Muroshi 2/16/12 . chapter 12
A very good story. I just wish there were an epilog about where he goes from there.
Mistress Rose Angeline 2/3/12 . chapter 12
Love it!
SupaCrazee 1/12/12 . chapter 12
BEAUTIFUL! *tears* I loved it! That was very well written... I really enjoyed. The characters were all spot on, and Adele Was very well written. :):)
potter29 11/22/11 . chapter 12
nice
Odami 5/5/11 . chapter 12
I second:"What an amazing and unique story!"

Thank you for the time, effort and emotion you put in it.
Kamey Rynn 5/4/11 . chapter 12
Very nicely done.
blueEyre 4/27/11 . chapter 12
really good story. I like your idea of the Clan and Harry's role as leader
anon 4/25/11 . chapter 12
What an amazing and unique story! There were a couple of times I almost stopped reading because I wasn't sure if I would like a Harry vampire story, but something always drew me in and made me keep reading. I'm really, really glad I did and I hope you continue to write fanfiction beccause I LOVE your work :).
thrnbrooke 4/23/11 . chapter 12
WONDERFUL! I soooo enjoyed this!
AnonymouslyKnown 4/20/11 . chapter 12
:D love this story
wolfj 4/20/11 . chapter 12
Great story.
EvilDime 4/16/11 . chapter 12
Pretty interesting story,though sad. I like it.

I'd have enjoyed seeing a bit about the Wiz World's reactions to Voldemort's death (do they even finally believe he was still alive?) and to Harry the Vampire (I think the events at the trial were probably not representative for the way the common wizard in the streets will treat Harry now). I wonder if he moved to Canada...

- Dime
As The World Burns 4/15/11 . chapter 12
Amazing story! I love how you kept all the characters in character and yet changed them to fit your story. I think you captured them all perfectly. Thanks for writing this amazing story (like all your others). I cant wait for more!
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