Wow, another great story. Everything rang very true to the characters. Laughed helplessly at the comedy, loved the change in mood at the ending.

that was awesome

hehe the bunny suit

I seem to get very caught up in your stories and didn't like those last two words, "THE END." Does it really have to be? Just when Logan is at his emotionally repressed best (which you portrayed wonderfully.)

Sorry it took me so long to get here but ... you know. Anyway, it was great, definitely worth the wait. It's almost like the bad behavior of some of the Cale family gives Max and Logan the excuse to be nice to each other. Glad to see Marianne is one of the good guys, and it makes perfect sense for Max to appreciate and revel in the beautiful surroundings and fine food and wine. For all her military background, she's not a Puritan like Logan! And the last scene, over the cigars ... wow. Nice to see more of the Cale family story and some sweet M/L at the same time. Thanks!

that's an excellent story... but why did it have to end here....?? pls continue....
i love the way you write abt how comfortable they are abt Logan's paralysis... its so .... natural.... anyway, hope you continue....

Nice job cath. I liked the way you expanded on Jonas and Logan's relationship a little more then we got from the show.

I liked the ending - seemed in character for Logan
to me especially at the point in time that it takes place.

Nice fill in of a missing but intriguing piece.

After AA I always wondered if we'd ever get to see the giant bunny outfit. So here it was and it's great!

I love the way you described the family and the relationships. And I don't think it's a strange place to end the story. This way it's something that could have happened on the show and just wasn't shown.

But on the other hand I'd love to read a sequel.
Please think about it.

I Loved Your Story.-Not Telling-

It's a really nice story, but is that the end? It seems like a strange place to end it.

This was good. I liked it. Very good characterization, and Jonas was just so evil you wanna slap him! I LOOOOOOVED the Jonas skipping around in a bunny suit thing, omg that was hysterical! Are you going to write more?

Hey I like it. I hate Logan's Uncle Jonas and I like how u put him in a bad light. Keep writing!

god jonas was such an a$$! hey but we already knew that right?.lol. great story i really enjoyed it:)

Love the giant bunny costume! I don't think I'm going to get that image out of my head for some time. But that's a good thing. I liked how the surface of the story showed a funny but dysfunctional family, but the undertones were much darker, like the family itself. Logan's good humor about his disability was very nice, he does seem a lot more comforatble with it after Haven.
But you can't end it here there is to much up in the air. Max wouldn't let him get away with being 'crapped on by his own family' like that.

Hehehehe...This was so cute!! I loved it and I want more!! You can't just leave us there!

What a sweet chapter!!! It is just a *chapter* right?? There is more to come, right? You can't just leave it at that.... Logan has to open up to Max about it... have her reassure him. You know...basically turn this into the purest of fluff... please?! I want to know what comes next.... more more more more more more more .... ;o)