N'aww Thankyou For Noel's POV!

This Is Such A Great Story, Chapter 3 Is My Favourite, It's sweet And shows How They Really Are.

I Love Noel And Julian To Bits In Reality (Especially Noel XD)

Keep Going..Can't Wait To Hear More And See How Rich Can Be Taken Out Of The Picture..If He Is Taken Out Of The Picture ) xx

this was good, i liked the last chapter because it was nice to have it in noel's pov :)

This Story Is Amazing,

Just a Couple Of Pointers

Noel's Characterization Is Good But You Also Need To Incorporate His Selfless Side. In Reality Noel's An Incredibly Nice Person. In This Story All You See Is Cruelty. (It's Great But Noel's Not All Bad )..)

Maybe You Could Do A Chapter Dedicated To Noel's POV..I'd Love To See How He's Really Thinking.

This Is A Brilliant Story Keep Going I Look Forward To Hearing Some More! xxx

Oh this made me so sad!

You did a great job at writing this, though. The moments and the looks they exchanged, you described it very realistically. Well done. :)

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