|Reviews for White Shadows|
| kokoronagomu 4/11/11 . chapter 1
lovely little story, i enjoyed the surprise for kenshin at the end. wondering if kenshin's was the pack who suddenly quit kanryuu's employ, but i would imagine that they would then know megumi.
prior claim -does that mean that he should ask kaoru permission for moving his pack into her territory?
i know nothing of norway so your google descriptions are good enough for me. eagerly anticipating more!
| Erroneously 4/11/11 . chapter 1
This is great! I love the way you set things up, especially how it's just sprung on Kenshin who and what Kaoru is XD
| Kurosaki Razhel 4/11/11 . chapter 1
LOVE. LOVE. LOVE. I'm glad you're alive and writing, I was worried for a while. Thank you for the new story! 3
| D-Chan3 4/11/11 . chapter 1
I like this a lot. more please.
| Valhara 4/11/11 . chapter 1
I always love your wolf stories and am glad you wrote another one to light up a dull day. :) I love how the pack dynamic is similar to your previous story...lol, so fun to see how they interact. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the wonderful work!
| smoking caramels 4/11/11 . chapter 1
I love your wolf stories! I can't wait for the second part!
| C.Majalis 4/11/11 . chapter 1
YAY another werewolf story! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! XD
| vamp1987 4/11/11 . chapter 1
This is interesting. I can't wait to see how it is resolved. Doesn't sound like Kenshin will be feeling lonely for long.
| neverluck 4/11/11 . chapter 1
Before anything, I love your writing. Especially when it concerns "creatures" like werewolves and the 'other.' The premise of this story is fun and catches the mind. I'm ready for part 2 to be posted already.
Let me say thank you for spacing your paragraphs in an easy to read manner as well. Besides one or two small typos, it's well written and conveys your meaning and thoughts without fault.
Great chapter and story!
| Azhwi 4/11/11 . chapter 1
There's something about surprising Kenshin that I absolutely love. It's so fun! And it's always Kaoru.
Seriously - to hide from a whole pack of wolves for a year? Living in the same small town, crossing each other's paths, roads, interacting with the same people, I'm amazed that she was able to pull it off for so long.
I saw the mention of the businessman. Ugh... I hope that the cancelled meeting didn't tip him off too badly, but it is too coincidental for him to ignore. I'm looking forward to seeing who he brings as muscle.
Great story! Thank you for sharing!
| Dylynn 4/11/11 . chapter 1
As always, great story, and am enjoying the upcoming dominance games between Kenshin/Karou always fun! I'm enjoying the byplay between Tae/Kaoru on her alfa-ness.
| ShadowCrawlerCiel 4/11/11 . chapter 1
You don't even know how much I love your stories. And how much I love you right now! I've been looking for an awesome Kenshin/Kaoru fic...and you have given it to me! I cannot wait for an update! :D
| Cherry 4/11/11 . chapter 1
Hi! In truth, I haven't read this chapter yet, because I want to wait for the second part to come out and read it all in one go. But, having been a fan of yours for a long time, I'm betting this story will be awesome to read! Can't wait for chapter 2 to come out! :)
| Dea Mariella 4/11/11 . chapter 1
Ooh! Wolf fiction, but I like how you've introduced them all! That phone call was excellent. I personally would have ignored the "Japanese people in Norway" question, but you handled it well enough.
I want to know what Kaoru does for work - probably something internet required, since she doesn't have to go into town for it.
Was Kaoru supposed to be able to tell that Tae was a witch? Everyone else seems to sense it pretty easily.
Looking forward to part two!
| libra gal 4/11/11 . chapter 1
Wolves! I love your wolf stories! There's something about them that just attracts me
I can't wait to read the next chapter!