Good job.

Very sweet but not mushy. Nicely done!

Awwww this is soooo cute. And it fits anywhere in the series. Just lovely. I can't seem to say anything about this (which is not bad for you, but not good for me...) I wanna be a nice person who comments constructively and not just go wow this is great! :)

Very pretty, very nicely executed. Simple yet telling.

Good work.

That was cute

This one is good. I hope that you would like to write more but I think it stopps there, right.?

Oooh, that as sweet! But one chapter is really not enought *pouts*! Would you write more? Please?

good!

Kawaii! _.

ANother excellent fic! Congrats!

Awwwwwww... very glad you decided to extend this one out into more than a 'snippit'. Worth it! I could practically *see* Ran doing that little 'victory dance'... :P