James eyes are hazel. I like this chapter please keep updating :)

iI love it can't wait to read more :)

Cool story

extriordonary writing

what more cud u ask for

keep writing!

Loveee this story so far!

Aren't James' eyes hazel?

I like your story too. Very nice...

So many emotions. So many feelings. So much good writing!

This is such a good story! I think you have to start to focus on the sexual tention between james and Lily a little more and (thinking the james has feelings for lily) maybe make it obvious that he is woried for her when she is sad and stuff like that while still keeping the cokiness. but seriously i love this story and you seem like a very good writter. Cant wait till you post the next chapter!

I'm enjoying your story so far, but at this point can't imagine how Lily would ever be willing to be in a real relationship with James. He is really cruel and I am interested in seeing how you help them both mature and change, as the way they are now they would never work. Thanks for sharing your story

That is one disturbing chapter

Update soon!

omg love it so much this is my favorite story!

please try to up date fastt!

i want to see what happens to james and lily!

and yer :)

i really like your story

and its so cute

i think they should get together soon but like secretly doing it

and not straight away just kissing and that :)

keep writing and cant wait to see what happens next

That was spectacular! Lily acting on impulse was awesome. :D Can't wait for the next chapter.

With tons of love,

Liloony xoxoxo

This was awesome! Plz continue. Btw have u seen Harry Potter 7 part 2 trailer? Its so intense! Can't wait!

i love what you did with this chapter its good and interesting

cant wait to see what happens nexxt! :)