One of the best short fics I've read, the unusual chaecter pov and the emotions are truely moving. Thanks!

Good view of Cordelia's changing character; good writing. Can't wait to see alot more!

Very imaginative! I liked how you touched all of the hard points from Cordy's life. I especially liked the ending!

Very interesting, and very good. I like the view you chose to take of Cordelia, it's original in a sea of cliche'd fiction. And your writing style is intriguing as well.

Good job.