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petardi 5/23/12 . chapter 9
Oh my goodness, I have read and re-read your stories so many times, and am only now realising that I have never taken the time to review (which is what I made this account to do, I hate how impersonal reviewing anonymously can be)! First off, I would like to say how great it is to see someone else gush about "King Corn" and the use of Ryan Adams' "Desire", it's been far too long since I've talked about/watched The West Wing, I feel like like grabbing my DVDs and watching it all over again! Secondly, this story (and the ones preceding it) is one of my all-time favourites; so incredibly well-put together, both it's plot and characterisation are impeccable - more than once I have found myself trawling through sites that deal in canon to find out what episode something was in, only to later realise it wasn't in the show at all. So looking forward to reading what happens next!
fan 5/3/12 . chapter 9
I'm a creature of habit. It's Thursday 10pm. Can you please update? Need me some Luka & Abby :)
katy 4/26/12 . chapter 9
First of all :

"We always did make good use of other people's weddings " You couldn't be more right !

I loved everything about this chapter since abby being all neurotic about leaving joe till they in the hotel room.

Also it looks like Luka is starting to open up more easily :) good for him,I adore the flashback ,Luka saying that he didn't care as long as abby loved sweet :),and then abby trying to be with Luka but she can't I thought it was really in character nice job :)Also abby in a dress I would love to see that !

keep going you're great don't take too long on the next chapter
hellen 4/22/12 . chapter 9
Amazing ! I love everything about it I specially enjoy the flashback.

First of all abby scared that joe will like it better at isabella's and luka trying to calm her down wonderfull !

The wedding , dancing ,laughing, flirting and having a good time

it was so well written you do this perfectly.

Now the flashback I think I was the best part of the chapter , I have always wonder what happened in croatia , and that part you writte was just what I would have liked to seen on the done! Please keep doing flashback !

And the smut part well that's always nice keep going :)

I'm looking forward to your next update

PS:sorry for my english I hope you can understand
Luana 4/11/12 . chapter 9
Absolutely perfect *-*
girlintheyankeeshat 4/8/12 . chapter 6
The bit with the peach juice? Just perfect. Very, very sexy and yet not explicit, not easy to do.

"With Brian, as much as with the other times, I think that he did love me, and I'm not sure it was until that night that he realized it."

I agree with this completely in that I always thought that was his moment of revelation, too.

"Buzz and the princess got to sit on top of the fridge for the rest of the night. I think the injustice united them." Hee. Just wonderful.

I think what I adore most about this chapter is Luka's total understanding and offering of comfort after Abby's bad night along with her total acceptance and gratitude of just letting him be there.
S.Woods 4/6/12 . chapter 9
I'm sorry it's been a while since I last reviewed, I think, but I really really enjoy this story!

I loved this chapter, it was so sweet, I love that they're so there for each other, both of them...loved your version of what happened after they left...

You're an awesome writer, keep going!
la lisboa 4/6/12 . chapter 9
Fantastic installment, as always!

I quite enjoyed the opposite of fighting.
anon 4/5/12 . chapter 9
Color me excited, a new chapter! Loved that you worked in some references to I Do. That was one of my favorite times/episodes for Luka and Abby and even though I'm glad they didn't make us wait, I wanted to see more of that buildup. The whole chapter is awesome but I loved the very end. What a great last line.
katy 4/1/12 . chapter 8
awesome chapter ! I gotta tell you I think you did a wonderfull job with their fight , I really like that abby has found a new sponsor , and most of all I loved that she said that she loves luka's kid I think luka really need it to hear that from her .

Please keep going and don't take too long with the next chapter :)
hellen 3/10/12 . chapter 8
Absolutely perfect !.I actually wanted to see them fight because I knew that you were gonna do an excellent job with it ,and I was right ,I loved that they fix everething and that luka is starting to open up more , and I love that she knew that he went to mass , I really wanna see what happens with abby's dad.

I would love to see abby hanging out with some old friend maybe from college or high school :).

Please keep going your doing an amazing job ,I look forward to your next update please don't take too long :)
girlintheyankeeshat 3/10/12 . chapter 5
Time to catch up on my reviewing, I think, sorry I'm so far behind!

Well, I love this chapter - and not just because of the countertop smut. It's funny but domestic Abby works so brilliantly here and yet still retains the wit and the slivers of self-doubt that are such a part of her character - really good writing. Joe playing heavy metal with a spoon on the oven door is perfectly observed, I can just see it perfectly.
anon 3/3/12 . chapter 8
Was so excited to see that you updated! Really enjoyed this latest addition. Was so impressed with how you handled the fight. Just really good stuff.
S-E 2/29/12 . chapter 8
If you post a chapter on leap day, does it still exist next year?

Great chapter, by the way. When I was reading it again, I found I enjoyed their fight and its aftermath so much better. Must be those subtle changes.
SuzanneHerdman 2/29/12 . chapter 8
Very nice chapter!

Love how they can talk asnd voice how they feel now!

Looking forward to more!
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