Just amazing. Not only that, but an original chess analogy. Thank you for posting this, spangler.

My god. I thought you were going to kill her. Great ending.

That was a great story! Very thoughtout. Keep writing (esp. C/A)!

A really excellent story, very well written.

I saw the title and I had to read it! I couldn't help but smile when I saw Las Cruces, because that is where I'm from! I loved this fic! I'm slightly leaning towards A/C, so I really enjoyed thier being together in this! Good work, very imaginative!