I like the back and forth letters alot. You've got Dawn's voice down well, although she's happier then I've ever heard her. Good for her and you too! You are going to finish this aren't you?

Continue please! Lake Aburrido reminds me of the summer camp that I work at, well, except for the whole demon thing. How about working in the whole campfire singing thing?

LoL! XD That was actually quite funny. And you got that Kappa thing from Harry Potter, didn't ya? Cuzz that's exactly like it is in the books, sans the cucumber thing. Anyways, great fic! Made me laugh!

LOL! This was very hysterical and VERY well-written. Please update this soon!

lol. cucumber...

lol, very funny

I love this. Please write more soon.