What language was this first? I could help you find a translator. This seems to have potential, but the grammar is so horrible I can't even start describing it. Lo please, please reply to this. The Aion fanfics are already very few, and if possible let's try making the ones already posted look better. Ok?

Well, i used google translator so its, truly bad ahahaha... Beside, i couldnt english when I write it. But I will rewrite it in english. Thanx for review :)

Umm, I didn't understand, bad grammar, but anyways tnx for trying!