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| Reviews for The Naiad Trilogy: The Naiad Within |
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   Elizabeth Zara 5/6/11 . chapter 9Yay! She's a naiad princess :D It was amazing! Is this the end? I am guessing not, because the title says "Part 1". I thought Caspian and Ava would end up together.. Maybe there's still hope.. But she will always go back to the water, even if they're together.. Hey! Maybe that's part of the reason he sails on the DT- Ava can go too! And he get to find the lords. It's a win win situation. :) sorry, random thoughts.. Good job! Thank you for updating so fast too! |
| Evy201 5/6/11 . chapter 9 A naiad princess :) Glad that Dr Cornelius was freed; it's funny, i never thought where he would be when the battle was going on. Update soon |
| Elizabeth Zara 5/5/11 . chapter 8 I think I forgot to read last chapter, sorry! I love it! It's awesome. I am glad they found Cherie and Ava found her true calling.. So she's a naiad now? Wow. That was cool. It was like three seconds and in that time so much happened. :) Update soon! Good job! |
| Evy201 5/5/11 . chapter 8 great chapter, update soon x |
| winter1990 5/5/11 . chapter 8 I love the story so far!I can't wait to see what happens next :) please update soon! |
| Hopefeather 5/4/11 . chapter 8 OOooooh! ava looks alot prettier without those servant clothes! keep writing! not now, but when you have time! ) |
| Carlypso 5/4/11 . chapter 8 Ava has suddenly become more awesome, and we are still unsure as to why? I WANNA KNOW! |
| kcollins720 5/4/11 . chapter 8 OOOOOOOO great chapter. I loved the end. |
| kcollins720 5/2/11 . chapter 7 Another great chapter. Can't wait for the next. |
| Evy201 5/2/11 . chapter 7 Great chapter; loved how Destrier revealed he was a talking horse. update soon |
| Carlypso 5/2/11 . chapter 7 yay! I can't wait for more! |
| Hopefeather 5/1/11 . chapter 7 I Loved it! ) |
| Elizabeth Zara 4/29/11 . chapter 6 I think things were fine regarding Caspian and Ava. They were awkward but it fitted the situation. Haha.. Poor Ava. Narnia's heartbeat turned out to be her worst nightmare, not a dream come true. It was slightly funny though :) Love it! Update soon? |
| kcollins720 4/28/11 . chapter 6 Loved this chapter. No I don't think the convo between and Ava and Caspian was too much, I liked it. Can't wait for more, you are doing an awesome job. |
| Evy201 4/28/11 . chapter 6 I think you got their behaviour spot on. The conversation was awkward with the silences but like the first step of friendship in a way. You try not to offend them and try to compliment them which is what they were doing. It was sweet and a great chapter. Update soon |
