 Barbara LeMaster 1/27/03 . chapter 1 I like the story, but you might consider changing the rating from "PG-13" to "R" due to the content. I can imagine Ivy as a nymphomaniac but I didn't quite think of her as a dominatrix.
It's definitely one of the more interesting Brock/Ivy fics I've read, and a cautionary coming of age tale. Well done. |