SO good! poor brock!

cool.

I like the story, but you might consider changing the rating from "PG-13" to "R" due to the content. I can imagine Ivy as a nymphomaniac but I didn't quite think of her as a dominatrix.

It's definitely one of the more interesting Brock/Ivy fics I've read, and a cautionary coming of age tale. Well done.

It is dark, but it is also probably pretty close to what really happened between Brock and Ivy on Valencia Island. Who knows? We may learn the /real/ story someday...

BenRG's Rating: 8/10 - Not afraid to be gritty. That's good.