Pfff. XD I loved this! I'm such a huge fan of Lyra and Morty, and this was hilarious and cute. :3

I officially love Morty's Pokemon. This was so cute and funny! If only Pokemon was real and we could date the cute guys of the Pokemon Universe... That last part was meant to stay in my head. Since I typed it out anyway, who agrees that would be a plus to being in the Pokemon world?

awww! this is such a cute story and chappie i absolutely love it! go soul! i always loved her personality ! great job with this one D!

himeko63

ahahaha XD great bonus chapter! I really enjoyed this little Morty/Soul piece _

wow that was somewhat shorter than I expected, but sweet and cute nonetheless _ now I want to kiss Morty...lol. or at least own a scarf like his! :D

haha yeah Soul better keep Meganium in check :p d'aww they're on a date and he's letting her use his scarf! and of course, cliffhanger ending XD sorry for the late review, I've been really busy in real life _

Your story was SO cute. Chapter four made me LOL and 'awwww'.

Finessefully,

X

Ok this is cute, i love the description of Soul's thoughts during their kiss lol

Yes! Someone else who ships MortyxLyra! I wish they had a name... Morty is so adorable! XD

Actually...Green is the opposite of Red

:P

just pointing it out there hahaha lovely story by the way

I love this story!

i believe the shipping name is Folkloreshipping

This is SO CUTE AHHH! XD

LOL, yes Morty, she's very, very cold. X3

So, I found one mistake but after that I wasn't really paying attention cuz' I got wrapped up in the story. X3 [I'm tried of this! I need to fix this and get to the bottom of the Pokemon's reasons!] I'm 'tired' of this.

ANYways, this is adorable. Awesome, awesome job. _

Finessefully,

X

P.S. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

when you get a review there should be a reply link at the bottom of the email :)

wtf haha Morty's pokemon went on a rampage to turn his bedroom into a honeymoon suit? XD I can't wait for more _

I have read the two chapters and I really like it. I had a quick fangirl moment when you wrote that Morty was shirtless. I do with any Pokemon boys that are shirtless.

There were some spelling mistakes and you also need to work on you phrasing but overall it was really good.

I have a suggestion. Some stories I read, the authors wrote their thank you or something on the next chapter of their story either at the beginning or at the end of the chapter or wrote it in their author's note. I hope this helps.

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon!

THis is really adorable lol i love morty please write more :)