|Reviews for bones|
| xxRivaxx 11/5/11 . chapter 1
GOD i love you fanfics they are soooooo gorgeous this fanfic is beautiful just like always thankyou so much for this XD
| the general girl 10/29/11 . chapter 1
Ahaha, I've actually reviewed this before, but it's just so beautiful that I had to log out and do it again, all these months later.
Yes, I'm STILL periodically rereading this piece just because it's so damn gorgeous. Every time I do I feel like I'm finding something new, a nuance that I missed before (and I've just spotted the ee cummings nod!), and with every reread it's like an entirely different experience.
You have no idea how much I love your writing and pieces like this. ;n; Thanks again for something so beautiful! And subtle and nuanced and thought-provoking and have I mentioned how GORGEOUS BEAUTIFUL PRETTY BREATHTAKING your language is? xD
Because it is. :D
| kara 6/1/11 . chapter 1
| Ahmose Nefertari 5/29/11 . chapter 1
Amazing idea! That would be one of the few ways to save him (inside the canon limits). Well done.
| Dawnaven 5/24/11 . chapter 1
Haha :) I thought he was dead. This is cool. And confusing. :) But I understood it in the end, so it's all good. The way you broke up the scenes was pretty interesting, and it is great for this story. I liked reading it. _
| lil' Miss B 5/5/11 . chapter 1
This is really good. Different too. And in a fandom where it seems like so much out there has been done to death, its nice to read different. It was also your summary I expected something elso to have happened. I like suprises, too! :)
| GaaraHinataWake 4/18/11 . chapter 1
This was so good, I wish it would have been a little bit longer but it was good all the same.
| An Fox 4/15/11 . chapter 1
Painfully beautiful and I honestly prefer your Sakura than the actual one. I think i get it, Sakura essentially saves him with a new start by wiping out his memory leaving him with nothing but his own body, his bones so to speak. And that little boy is basically his new Naruto in a sense.
| the general girl 4/14/11 . chapter 1
Why are your fics always so amazing? ;-; I love how you allowed change and growth in Sakura's character (you showed it much better too than canon with that stupid kunai did)and Sasuke, man, he didn't deserve that new start, but in the end he's just a loss little kid and I really like how you make Sakura recognize that. (And yeaaah I feel the itsy bit of narusaku-friendship or more, doesn't matter, they're always adorable-fluff in the middle. :D )
On a sorta unrelated note, a bunch of us on livejournal's hosting a sasusaku month-voting for which month, june/july/august, is going on now but it seems like july will win-and I was hoping you'd be interested in taking a peek and maybe even participating as well. :D
| lg1514 4/14/11 . chapter 1
Good story, and very well written, but I don't get it :(
| SasuSaku Forever and Ever 4/13/11 . chapter 1
i love this. u r amazing!
| eeve 4/13/11 . chapter 1
Holy fuck profound!
Let me double check. Sakura mind-wiped Sasuke after he asked her to save him and then left him to be found by a peaceful rain country village? (AND I CAUGHT THAT THE PERSON THAT FOUND HIM PARALLELS NARUTO! OH, you brilliant, brilliant girl. You did that on purpose, didn't you?)
So fucking profound. Ahhhhhhhhh. Love it. That Sasuke is lost and knows it. That Sakura essentially kills him to save him, that she strips him down to the bones of who he is and leaves him! Her walking away That's justice and sacrifice.
So. Fucking. Profound.
| Raina1 4/13/11 . chapter 1
I'm assuming Sakura killed Sasuke? This was a good story but not very clear about what is going on. I felt the events were disjointed and not in linear order. I definitely would not have mistaken this for a romance because it doesn't read like one at all. In any other writer's hands, this would have been sappy, sad stuff, but I just feel nothing here but weariness... as if Sakura is drained of energy and cares. Good job!
| Black-footed 4/13/11 . chapter 1
Okay, that was frickin AMAZING, but I have some questions.
1. Was the body she dragging Sasuke's and she saw his ghost or was she just dragging a body with Sasuke's stuff (Itachi?) and saw him.
2. Did Sasuke accomplish his goal or did someone else?
I loved how she was going to erase his memory to save him. Oooooooo, the 'come with me' question, thank you for making her say no, it just makes the story so much better. Throughout the story I love how you wrote little things like the dragging of the body, the clear sky in rain country, it just made everything better.
| bells-mannequin 4/13/11 . chapter 1
First of all, this story is really great. It's dark and cruel and it's Sakura and Sasuke. This is wonderful.
I do not think, though, that I understood everything. For example what is the thing with Sakura wanting to erase her memories? Did she do it after killing Sasuke when she came back to Konoha, so that she cannot tell Naruto what has happened?
Would love to read your answer,