By Newleaf Town did you mean Newbark Town?

Dang it! Your story is all that I have always dreamed of in the world of Pokemon Adventures! Really nicely written, although there were quite a number of typos which I thought could really be improved to not throw the readers off!

… is it wrong that I found it highly amusing when Crystal kicked Ghetsis out of the building after he tried to attack Gold…?

8 time 15 120 15 135 amount of people feeding sir dragon plus ice

Confragrius has been the only pokemon that I ever found truly scary, and you sorta did that justice. But let me just say, triple volt tackle, overkill.
I found it a little strange that Giovanni did nothing during the Confragrius ordeal.

Aside from that, it took me this chapter to realize that the oldest dex holder (Blue) and the youngest (white) were traveling together. (Unless of course, white is older than black)

I KNEW IT!

I loved loved loved this chapter. I loved how you portrayed the legendary siblings. Everything was just so GAH! Last chapter's author's note mentioning N and Black becoming conversationalists definitely did not prepare me for this.

magnet rise is not in zekroms moveset (not that i care)

Love the idea of all the Dex Holders meeting up with each other!

Ok, the more I think about, I more I believe N is really just based of Lance in the Yellow arc of the manga. Not because of the way you've written him, but as a character in general :P

Doesn't White have a Servine, rather than a Samurott? Can't remember which clearly :P

I'm only on chapter 2 at the moment, but I say you wouldn't be far off on ages, actually. Far as I can tell in the manga, B/W and DPPt would all be around 13/14, RSE would be 15, GSC would be 17, Yellow would be 18 and RBG would be 19/20.

Wait... Could red be... Probably not

Uh just so you know Musha is male

She's a killer queen gunpowder jello time dynomite with a bit of green
See what I did there oldrival ftw