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Andrea the Chinchilla 11/6/11 . chapter 12
Awww this Little Mermaid is my favorite story :) I completely love this fairy-tale Fic and even more this chapter. Made me smile :D
HBee16 7/25/11 . chapter 4
How did I miss this one? I agree that Silver is really naive, but Blaze is usually more levelheaded than that. I guess she's just crabby from hunger. If she was entirely herself, she would never even consider selling the emeralds.
LadySkarlettofSkaro 7/2/11 . chapter 17
I would like a sequel; I definitely enjoyed this story. :D
LadySkarlettofSkaro 7/2/11 . chapter 16
That's it, Sonic; flip him off before going to sleep! :D
LadySkarlettofSkaro 7/2/11 . chapter 15
How did an Eggman cookie outrun them all?
LadySkarlettofSkaro 7/2/11 . chapter 12
Again with the finger and profanity by Shadow. I love it!

"Oh, you've got to be kidding me! Knucklehead is the king?" "That means this kingdom is screwed big time." That got a lot of laughs from me. :)
LadySkarlettofSkaro 7/2/11 . chapter 11
Huh; Sonaze...interesting pairingd despite the fact they've never really been close. I'd prefer Silvaze.

But THANK you for saying the roles worked out like that. :) That made me relieved.
LadySkarlettofSkaro 7/2/11 . chapter 10
Aw, poor Silver. He was alone...and he wanted to be where Sonic was, I bet. ;) (sorry, Silvaze fan. And Silver fangirl.)
LadySkarlettofSkaro 7/2/11 . chapter 8
"There's no need for us to worry about the Shadster. He's a big boy, and he can take care of himself."

Best line ever!
LadySkarlettofSkaro 7/2/11 . chapter 7
Love how everyone's getting the finger. And how everything melds together.
LadySkarlettofSkaro 7/2/11 . chapter 1
Love the idea; being pulled into a fairy tale book. :)

Prologue, so far, is good. Hope to enjoy the rest.
DanceDream 6/16/11 . chapter 17
Aw, that's the end? D Oh, well, at least they all lived happily ever after! D

The Gingerbread Man: Haha, cute! I would LOVE to know how the Chaos Emerald-shaped cookie turned into and Eggman-shaped cookie in the oven (and how he survived that!), but hey, it's a fairy tale. Although, wouldn't you think that Tails should be the fox at the end of the story? :/ Sonic should have just eaten the cookie on his way out. Oh, well!

Snow White: I love this twist! D I could practically see the thoughts running through Blaze's mind: "Wait, this must be some twisted version of Snow White, which means... EW!" :P And, of course, it's all Knuckles's fault that happened.

Last... erm, battle: GOOO SHADOW! I knew he was in there for something besides giving Sonic "the finger" and saying, "I'm not in any of these stupid fairy tales! Get it in your heads!" D

I'm definitely all for a sequel! Maybe you could do some more fairy tales, plus add in a few nursery rhymes, like "Little Miss Muffet" or "Little Boy Blue" (that's too perfect!). You could elaborate on them, since most of them are so short. Anyway, yeah, just an idea. :)

Great job, and congratulations on finishing the story! I hope to see a sequel soon!

- Over and out, DanceDream
LittlelNotini 6/16/11 . chapter 17
Good story
HBee16 6/16/11 . chapter 17
This story wad REALLY good. Maybe for the sequel you could do a Greek mythology type thing? I can see Silver & Blaze as Orpheus and Eurydice (Sonic NextGen reference). & Knux & Rouge kinda make me think of Hercules & Meg from the Disney movie. Anyway, it's just a suggestion. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
HBee16 6/16/11 . chapter 16
Ok I won't mention the Sonaze, but, once again, Sonic got a girl's role. How many more times is that gonna happen?
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