Nice, very good and a sweet ending. A really well mixed story.

Delightful story

Cool story!

Fantastic! I wish this could've been an episode, thank you.

Fabulous story. Thank you for writing. This was an unusual crossover and you did it very well. One technical note though. You do not do CPR on someone with a pulse. You can do rescue breathing, but if you do chest compressions on someone with a pulse you may stop their heart.

Oh, that was nice. I liked that. Interesting, true to the shows, everyone in character-great. Can't help but wish it had been longer, though, but it is a very good short(er) story. Thanks for sharing it.

This looks good so far! Since it's a collaboration effort, I must say that you two write well together. I'd say keep up the good work, but if this is finished already, that's rather pointless, so suffice to say I'm looking forward to reading the rest of this story.