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elderwolves 6/6/10 . chapter 1
Just to clear up the last post, I have no intention of posting the things that pop into my head. This is YOUR idea and I intend to leave it that way. Sorry for any misunderstandings. Gomen. :)
elderwolves 6/6/10 . chapter 1
Dude. I think I'm now madly in love with this concept. DARN YOU! As a fellow writer, I'll be walking around with my own fanfictions with this scenario in my head! I won't be able to stop! (grins evily)...thank you. 3
Bystander 9/25/08 . chapter 1
So Cute!

I love the idea of them having a kid!

Especially a daughter :)
nathan-p 5/5/07 . chapter 1
Oh Lord! That's gotta be the funniest thing I've read in a long time.

"world's biggest kitty-cat".

Hee.
metal-mako-dragon 12/14/06 . chapter 1
Written on suger and is therefore as sweet and fluffy as candyfloss! Aw!

Maiko
Cyclothymia 8/7/06 . chapter 1
Oh, this was cute. (And I'm under the impression that Ruka-chan would be the cutest little girl ever. I kind of want to draw her.) I love how you portrayed Muraki and Tsuzuki together through Ruka's eyes, and how she distinguishes between them with 'Dad' and 'Daddy'- it makes sense, as Muraki definitely isn't a 'Daddy' person. Muraki being a perv at Tsuzuki was funny, especially through Ruka's eyes- and I think that it's very characteristic for Muraki and Tsuzuki to keep calling each other by their last names, even though they're married.

And at first, I was a little worried that you made things tense or bad between Hisoka and Tsuzuki, because you mentioned Watari, Konoe and Tatsumi and didn't mention him- but then Uncle Oriya and his 'wife' came along and I died of glee.

So! Overall, it was ADORABLE and I loved it. (favorites)
SLeeplEzz.HeR0 3/1/06 . chapter 1
that was so cute! i really liked that you made them have a kid! They really make a good couple and the two of them make good parents! SO cute_
Requiem For The Innocent 12/20/05 . chapter 1
Aww Ru-chan's so cute *hugs Ru-chan*

Ru-chan: Makoto-neechan you're hurting me.

Me: Oh, srorry Ru-chan.
Helle's seraph 12/15/05 . chapter 1
Well... It's strange and twisted but I liked it anyway! hahahaha I had a fun time twisting my mind around the concept of everyone's psychotic doctor and the angst personified living such a conventional life
elveljung 8/14/05 . chapter 1
I can't believe it took me so long to rediscover this gorgeous ficlet; I read it ages ago in a different archive, to which I then stupidly forgot the adress, and have been looking for it ever since. Two Daddies had me laughing so hard, and using little Ruka as the narrator is just perfect - her sweet, innocent, profund retelling of them makes the events even more hiliarous. In so many words, great work.
Three of a kind 6/10/05 . chapter 1
E-YEE! It's been so long since I've read this, and I never read it here! There was another website that had this, and it included the smexy-uber-erotic prelude, which I can't find anymore... *is vair sad* I really desperately would LURVE to reread it! Could you get me linkage, please?

Brill story, by the way, absolutely lovely! *loves*

Rajah
dyingstar-elipsis 12/26/03 . chapter 1
hey, i tink its really lovely and sweet. muraki is gd ::yeah:: hisoka is married to oriya ::omg:: its wonderful. i really LOVE your pairings ::grinz:: btw, diz suppose to be quite long ago rite? luckily i came across it. i really love it
janetan 12/24/03 . chapter 1
the way muraki ruka was portrayed from her POV was really cute and sweet. gd job!
DyingPoet 11/16/03 . chapter 1
That was so utterly adorable I think I'll print it out. Whee! It's very creative and very funny without being stupid. :D In fact, I'd like to see more of these!
Xelena 10/5/03 . chapter 1
aw- that's so sweet. i was wondering about that... i mean, since two men can't have kids. but using a spell makes sense... although, Tsu's explanation might've worked too since Suzaku's a girl and one of his Shikigami. PS- i'm on the MuTsu list
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