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| Reviews for The Legend of Shane: A Second Chance |
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  Anonymous Fan 4/13/13 . chapter 17 Please Write more of this! It's been 9 months and I really want to know what happens! |
 Lay Down Hunter 7/24/12 . chapter 3He calls people a coward LMAO! What a little bitch! |
| Lay Down Hunter 7/24/12 . chapter 2 Lol life's a bitch get used to it |
| EternalNite 7/12/12 . chapter 17 AWWW. i is sad. good luck with your computer! |
| Darkfire Dragon28 4/29/12 . chapter 16 Are you ever gonna finish this? |
| FantasyDragonLegendz 4/22/12 . chapter 16 This is really good, keep it up! :) |
| Starduster the Dragoness 3/30/12 . chapter 16 I must admit this is a really awesome chapter, I love the humor, it had me rolling on the floor at times. :P Well not really on the floor, but close. XD Anyway, keep up the good work and enjoy your writing. |
| Darkness Oversoul 3/14/12 . chapter 16 Lol intro. |
| The1upguy 2/17/12 . chapter 9 I think the story is good. However, for some reason, you have appeared to stop using a spell check, and I don't know why? It slows people down in action sequences when they have to read it twice to understand. The best thing to do is proof read before saving. Also, in my OPINION, which with a token can get you on the subway, I think the story is developing a little slow, in these chapters. Other than that, this is an entertaining story with some humor. Don't be upset at what I wrote, Please. You wanted constructional critisism. I will continue reading the rest, and I do actually like this premise, and the Characters. Long Live SHANE or Spyro LOL |
| The1upguy 2/15/12 . chapter 4 This is a very good story, at least what I've read so far. Your imagingation is very good as well. I will finish reading what you have here later, and look foward to the other stories you may come up with. I will be taking some pointers from this and will add to my own. I will not copy your story, but hope to capture some of your inflections. Long Live Spyro, and Shane!LOL |
| Darkfire Dragon28 9/17/11 . chapter 14 This is amazing! I'm thoroughly impressed. I can't wait to see what happens next! |
| spyrofan35 9/15/11 . chapter 14 love it keep up the good work and to anyone that gives a dame about this please tell your friends about this story and how aswome it is k bye |
| Darkened Path 9/15/11 . chapter 14 well, not exactly what i expected, but whatever. |
| Ehanu Rehu 9/15/11 . chapter 14 Very good. Nicely done battle first of all, and very nice twist at the end. Keep it up! |
| Star Duster The Dragoness 9/15/11 . chapter 14 Yay, I've been really excited about reading the next chapter! I love the detail in your sentences and the way you describe everything. I must admit, though, that I got a little lost at the end. I had to re-read it a couple of times to understand what you were saying, but I could just be a bit slow today. ;) Also I would like to say you did a fine job in this chapter! So Shane now has the element of Fire, Time and Electricity. Soon he is going to be as powerful as Spyro, maybe more... (I hope that it doesn't get to his head though) I hope you get typing and update soon! Well, I think that is all for now... Until you update next, Star Duster The Dragoness |
