great story

Awesome chapter! I'm looking forward to more :)

Ok seriously this was awesome! I need another chapter soon! With a cliffhanger like that you need to update really really soon! I cant believe he switcched up his attitude so quick like that! He even had me fooled! Need more! Lol

Sometimes i think you update slow on purpose! Lol But anyways great chapter! I cant believe they got in a fight and Ghosts name didn't even come up. When the heck is he going to find out?

All i can say mate is finally. Finally! I can't wait to see the next chapter. I hope he finds out she's been seeing ghost!

Great story can't wait for more.

you udated, yeah!

I like this chapter. keep up the good work. finally theres a fanfiction story for this character.

Update soon please

Hey you should update.. please.. thanks..ohyeah, Why is John so controlling? Like I want you to wear these clothes and you have no choice if you want to come to the party or not..

i like your story wish you would update

I love this story! You have a very nice plot going on and I love the fact that she and Ghost know each other. I can't wait for everyone else to see them together! I don't think she should have forgiven him so quickly. If i caught my boyfriend doing that i would probably attack him and the girls lol. But everyone's different eh? I'm also super happy you didn't make her a mary sue! Please continue! I'm going to hurry and subscribe now! :)

I'm really enjoying this story! Ghost is intimidating and manipulative just like in the movie, and Lorraine is likeable.

And John's super sexy, of course :)

More chapters please!

i love it so far...she needs to crack the whip on john though

Woundering what happens next.

I liked it. Looking forward to more.

I hope she forgives him. John needs to kick that bad habit of his. Can't wait for the next chapter :)