Waaaahhhh, that made me cry so hard! I liked how it was cute in the beginning and established their happy lives, only for you to dash their happiness against the rocks.

So sad, but beautifully written!

Ok this story really got me. I am usually quite stoic but I was on the verge of tears the entire story. Great angst. Great job.

Beautiful! Loved it I nearly cried!

Okay, you made me cry. :D This was great! I loved it. The emotion in it is just perfect, and I love that the baby lived and was a piece of both Edward and Bella, so that their families still had some part of them.

Great job, I really liked this. :)

Wow... so much tragic emotion captured in one short story. Feeling so bad for Bella right now. Hopefully her sacrifice will help to heal the rest of the family that she left behind, and hopefully her death will help to reunite her with her long-lost husband.

Nice job!

Oh that was very sad, but a part of them both was left behind.

Well written.

Oh my.. that is so sad :(

but very, very good..