Please please write more! It is amazing! :)

oh, god! plese update. please update. please update. that's perfect.

Ahh! You ended right when it was getting to the good part! Please continue soon! :)

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Hi, I want you to know that I read a lot of fan fiction. Well, a lot of bad fan fiction, and you should know this is the most well written and insightful Princess Diaries, Michael's POV. Normally fan fiction writers have good ideas, but for me they get the characters all wrong. I love these characters so much and I feel like you do them justice. Especially Michael. You made it obvious that he likes Mia and he's confused over it, without making him unattractively desperate. You used the book to help your story, but didn't steal Mia's thoughts in her diary as Michael's. It became another story, like a companion to the first three books, but still original. I absolutely cannot wait until you get to book 10 (I hope you still plan on making it that far). I am really hoping you come up with a story while Michael is in Japan. I don't know if you plan to creatively write professionally, but you should seriously take it into consideration. Waiting for your next entry!
Anna

OMG I love what you have done here.

I hope that you have more to come.

WOAH! Sweet! That was amazing!

I'm in complete love with this. You've truly given a believable view of what Michael would be thinking during all of this, I feel like it's really something Meg would of written. Obviously looking forward mostly to the last book but I love each chapter, can't wait for the next one :D

im a new reader. this is good. i hope you'll continue :) can't wait

So I read this whole story in one go, and I absolutely love it! It's so refreshing for a story from Michael's point-of-view to be well-written. This is a major job well done! Also, I believe the way Michael expresses his emotions is just fine. Boys may not allow themselves to be expressive when surrounded by peers, but their is no doubt that they let themselves go emotionally when they are alone. They are human after all. Consequently, I personally felt as though everything was very realistic. And again, this story was/is amazing! I really do hope that you continue!

OMG...this is really good. PLEASE continue it! Only...guys aren't usually as...emotive as girls are. So tone down the sadness at seeing her and Kenny...and make it more...anger and jealousy. Because that would be more in character for him.

YAY! An update! And we're getting into the good stuff! ) Keep them coming!

i love this sooo much! are you writing more?

Are you going to make more chapters?