I like this story very much so far! It’s interesting to think that Rapunzel had someone to look after and care about (other than Pascal) up in that tower. I do have a question though. You mentioned that Rapunzel found Annie. How and where? Could you please explain that to me? ‘Cause I’m confused with that little detail. I’m actually surprised Flynn didn’t pry into that and just went along with it. I would have thought he’d throw a fit or something. But who knows? It’s Flynn Rider.

With Rapunzel having a little girl, hers and Flynn’s adventures together will be a lot different and hopefully more interesting. We’ll have to see though. Anyways, keep up the good work!

Oh, and one more thing; Flynn is spelled with a ‘y’ not an ‘i’ and has another ‘n’ at the end of his name. Just thought you should know.

I'm getting assulted by cuteness. How adorable IS Annie? Pascal's pretty cute aswell. Will Flynn be on the scene? I loved this chapter, and cannot wait to read the rest. You might want to describe Annie a bit more though. Has she got blonde hair like her Mama?

Lauren,

You spell Flin this way: F-L-Y-N-N. Just trying to help.

This was really good. But you keep spelling Flynn's name wrong.

Cool!

I like the concept you have here. It will be interesting to see if when they are in town they meet up with Annie's real family. I hope you continue.

I don't mean to be nitpicky, but Flynn is spelled like this, not Flin.

Anyway, great story, looking forward to more. :)

Another great chapter. Poor Flynn, I don't think even he believes Rapunzel just "found" a kid in the few hours she left, considering the baby is in the middle of no-where, but I understand why she wouldn't want to tell Flynn she had been with someone else, it would be embarrassing.

But wow, I can't wait to meet Rapunzel's lover, I bet it's going to be an epic showdown between him and Flynn over the baby.

I saw this movie with my little sister!

It's an interesting concept, but I'm a bit worried. If Rapunzel is 18 and has a two and a half year old daughter, she was only fifteen and a half when she had her, and she was only fourteen when she had sex. That does seem a bit young for Disney, but I like you going for a more adult look. I wonder who fathered the baby, and how Mother G didn't notice that Rapunzel was pregnant or realize Rapunzel left? (How could she get pregnant if she didn't leave, she's not the Virgin Mary, she did need a man)

'Rapunzel had to fight tooth and nail to be able to keep Annie when her mother found out. "

Poor Rapunzel, I could see Mother G trying to make her fosterling lose the pregnancy. Still can't believe innocent little Rapunzel got herself pregnant, it's brilliant.

Also, Annie seems like a weirdly modern name, but that's just to my tastes.

Also, speaking of modern stuff, people in medieval times didn't drink apple juice (it's a modern invention, they may drink cider but that's alcoholic) and they didn't have yogurt (it didn't come into wide use till the 19th century) and coloring books most certainly did not exist, paper was valuable and kids couldn't draw on books!

You should do some research in medieval times, hopefully it will give you some inspiration.

But I'm interested now, to see who Rapunzel's lover truly is.

I am really impressed at how adult your work has become, and I wish you well on your road to get published. With a little more research, you can go a long way.

This is a really cool idea. I'm very interested to see where this is going.