Wow. That was heart-breaking. Excellent description.

You are such an amazing writer, you actually made me cry which is quite hard to do! please post more soon.

You are such an amazing writer, you actually made me cry which is quite hard to do! please post more soon.

aww...that's so sad. i feel so bad for the baby! i wanted to thank you for doing those dave/jing-mei chapters a couple of chapters back. i relaly enjoyed those. your writing is amazing. please continue soon.

It's great- made me cry. I have one question...

WHY THE HELL WOULD YOU KILL LUKA?

Wow, I'm stunned. I am loving this! Please write more, I am so curious to know how this is going to end! Such sadness, but it makes the reader realise that the staff have more than a working relationship with each other. Write more soon!

OH MY GOD! that was so powerful, so beatifully written. This is the best fanfiction I've ever read; you had me sobbing like 8 times. I need to go get a drink cause my throat is soar from crying :( That was really amazing keep it up!

wow, this is story merits a least 4 boxes of kleenex

wow! what a great chapter! i am so sad that carter's dead. you should somehow have this end a carby. please post more soon!

go back to him! go back to him, dang it! sorry...had to get that out...lol...i liked this chapter, too. i'm glad you continued on the last one. i was so happy when i saw you had updated! anyway, great job, and please continue soon.

wow...that's all i can say...wow...i've been waiting for this dave chapter for a long time, and it was well worth the wait. beautifully written, and you captured both the characters perfectly. it's so sad, though. i feel so bad for dave...i hope jing-mei goes back to him. neither of them should be alone. anyway, very well done and i am really looking forward to the next chapter. please continue soon.

NOOOOO! Carter's dead! :(:(:( He was my fav aside from Abby!

this is so sad. i wish carter didn't die, cause i know he would have helped abby. maybe you could have him come back somehow. like maybe he never actually died, he just left...for some odd reason.i don't know. but this should somehow end a carby. not that is should end any time soon, cause it's a really great story. :D please continue!

ok. this was a really great story and im going to assume you're a luby, but WHY DID U HAVE TO KILL CARTER?that was just heart wrenching. oh well. i like your writing style. good work.

Ooh, how is he at fault? This is getting even more interesting... Great job! *Liz*