that was good keep it up

beautiful dialogue!

Oh noooo! Save him! Wow that last part gave me goosebumps. It just looks so hopeless for Damon, how bittersweet to finally find out that Elena loves him. And I liked that Greta was on the winning team in the end. It would be good for Bonnie to have another witch friend, I hope she doesn't end up like Luka. Loved the chapter, update soon!

awesomely written !

I think in a lot of ways that Elijah respects Stefan less now for apologizing. I was really hoping Damon would say something to the effect of "I will never apologize" but instead he said "You all can go to Hell" and I was disappointed in him. I hope Elena confronts him about Andie, and I like the way you worked it out in this story.

It's about time she finally said thank you. Geez! For all he does for her it's sad that he's always so alone. I like the Damon POV, nicely done :) Can't wait for your next chapter!

The internal dialogue spin was nice, I really hope thats what is going through her head. I like that you mentioned that she was just trying to show them that she could be a protector too. It would be really hard to just stand by helplessly and let everyone you love die for you, even if it was for a higher supernatural purpose. I hope Elena gets to say all those things on her mind and let Damon finally get the girl :)