   xXxArcoRainbowYanagi-SamaxXx 3/16/07 . chapter 21loved it |
| animegirl1037 8/20/02 . chapter 21 Aww...what a good ending. GROUP HUG! *hugs everyone in a ten-mile distance* |
| Raphaella 8/20/02 . chapter 19 Wicked! This was great! Ur not gunna leave it there r ya? That was awesome! Great story! [{(R)}] |
| animegirl1037 8/1/02 . chapter 18 I uv this story! I've been reading it through all the chapters! Please write more! |
| hexAdecimal 8/1/02 . chapter 18 oooooh nice chapter hurry with the next |
| anon 6/13/02 . chapter 16 Keep Going! |
| Nikki 6/4/02 . chapter 16 Go Raph! I knew he would make it, though! I can't wait till the next chapter comes out, and I hope Ashton is okay
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| Lone Wolfette 6/4/02 . chapter 16 Love it, love it! I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Hikari 6/2/02 . chapter 2 Yay! She has a name! Ashton seems pretty cool so far and I can't wait to read more. To be honest I really got into it when your description mentioned her dark skin tone... _ |
| Wildfire2 5/26/02 . chapter 14 I love this fic! I look foawrd to reading more! Is something going to happen to Raph? Like her and Ashton seem pretty close.. he going to try and break her out on his own or somthing? Is he going to get hurt? PLEASE WRITE MROE! |
| hexAdecimal 5/10/02 . chapter 12 0.0 no way! hurry with the next chapter...I realy hate clif hangers |
| Splinter 5/6/02 . chapter 11 LOL! I always thought Splinter should have found some excuse to ground Raphael from that bike when the show was airing. Better late than never. Nice job and keep the chapters comin' |
| Xantall of the Farwood 5/3/02 . chapter 9 Ok this is relly good. And I love your char. She neat! Next chapter soon. |
| Machias Banshee 5/2/02 . chapter 9 Wow, so THAT's how she knows the doc!
Uh-oh, looks like Raph's in trouble! *EG* Cant wait to see the next chapter! |
| Lone Wolfette 5/2/02 . chapter 9 I am loving this fic! Please add more soon ;) |
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