great story! wish there were more keith and david stories like it

I just love this. I'm just getting into the fandom and this is certainly one of the best stories I've read so far.

This is good. Damn good. Most people would assume it's easy to write for David's bitchy character, but in fact it's not! You, however, have nailed the mannerisms of both David and Keith. Truly anxious to read more!

What is David's problem? I hope David and Keith make up soon.

Great chapter, looking forward for more.

A wonderful, well written story. Very true to the characters. Please continue!

Wow, this seems a really good story... I hope you'll continue with this. I love the way you write Keith, it's so real. And all those small things you use to describe him... He's awesome. And you are, too.

here's some fuel:

i've been a fan of your writing for awhile, sorry for being so quiet. i shoulda spoken up sooner. you've nailed David to a tee, which is difficult to do. i always wonder why SFU is such a small fandom for being such a brilliant show, and i've pondered jumping into writing the Fishers but i feel like i can't do them justice. you do, and then some.

seriously, you're a seriously gifted writer and i would love to see more.

I am loving this story. Looking forward in what happens next between David and Keith. Great chapter.