i love it

It is sweet how she tends to her child but I think he WOULD have gotten up to her and also I think that the child would have been brought into the parents room. Then again that is just what I would do in their position. Very well written although could do with more detail and emotion. It is a fabulous story idea, it is great that you made me FEEL for the child, not many can achieve that

lols, this was so funny its like ,honey wink eyelash flutter, its your turn now, hee hee