this story was REALLY good.

great plots

great distinct characters

and so many more good things...

the one thing i found HILARIOUS was tht u said u would post a sequel "soon".

it's been idk...6 YEARS since u last updated the story

idk about u but i don't consider tht soon...

Great Story! Hope you write more

OMG! you have a really good story line here! I really enjoyed reading it, and I've already read your other two stories, and let me know when you start writing the other one!

I don't think any hospital would be stupid enough to let a baby that weighed less than 5 lbs leave the premises...

loved it very much. al of it. i like it that you finish your stories and don't leave the readers hangin

I CAN'T BELIEVE HOW GOOD THIS IS! THIS COULD BE COMPARED TO THE REAL SWEET VALLEY BOOKS! aLSO i LIKE THE FACT THAT ITS LONG

hey omg! that was an awesome stry it felt so real like it was just another book it was great! i wish it wasnt over cuz u r great at writting these type of stories um... i really dont have ne suggestions for u but keep on writting different fanfictions and ill read them keep up the good work(ok that sounded dorky but o well lol) and keep on writting

i've review this before,i think as thejkidds sure- but i love it soo much i had to write again you are one of my favorite authors and i hope everything you ever wrote was this good gosh i could have been reading a sweet valleybook no novel if this was ever published and it would definetly be the best one you and summer kisses man!

i loved it but why would have ever thought of coner has sweet he does like instantly dump a girl right away but what if something had ever happened between conner and jessica- wait this is a review-okay i loved it it was really seventy two pages that's way longer than any of my stories(not fanfics)you are a very very very very very very very very very very very very very good writer and i am sad to read the last words to this fanfic no! it's good enough to be its own svh book well in my opinion have i ever read something as good as this too bad i hadnt heard of this sight sooner because this was the best story i have ever read you are so creative

yeaah! that ned wakefield finally acted his age some lawyer he is i loved it

i liked it but i don't like the dad he's got some serious problems can't wait to read the next chapter

bye bye will simmons forget the foxes melissa can make it without them love it

thank god she's okay that made me so happier to know my favorite girl character didn't die

noo! poor jeremy this story makes me want to cry

i like it will simmons is such a jerk how many girls did he freaking rape love the story