You know I'm gonna cry if this is abandoned right? I'm an impatient young woman (yh right) and it would not do you much good if you don't update soon (this is very serious so IF you read it, read it in a serious voice-preferably with a British accent)... PLZ UPDATE THIS - or else

(you) or else what?

(me) or else I cry.

(you) OH NOES I will update as soon as possible for you..

Yeah as if that would ACTUALLY happen... forever alo-I hate that meme...

WHERE THE HECK IS THE NEXT CHAPTER?

xD Me like this story

I want to see where this story goes. It starts like canon enough. I wonder how they end up kissing? (,) BTW, I suggest lowering the rating from M and just changing it later on so your story doesn't get screened out from searches with lower ratings (especially since your first chapter doesn't contain M content.).

keep writing :)

heya :) i'm loving your story so far, i especially like your take on lizzy :) can't wait for your next update, hope it will be soon? :) x

when are u updaging! I really like your story its really good..

Mr. Darcy, he never learns does he? Great beginning!

It's an interesting new take on the classic story, and I intend to find out how it ends. :)

This is so good! I'm really looking forward to reading another chapter! I'm glad you kept their mannerisms the same, and it's not outrageously out of character like some stories I've read. Another chapter! Stat!

You tricked me. I didnt think I was starting a story that was a modern cannon version of pride and prejudice. Not sure if I will continue. I can only read so many modern versions of the same exact story line. I hope you change it up, or maybe keep it in the present with maybe some flashbacks? I could deal with that. I want to get back to them in the present.

OOOHH! Please continue this! It's really good!

I love how Lizzy is a painter. 3

Please continue.

Good story, I hope to see more soon.

Great start! Keep on writing, I can't wait to read more of it!

I like what I see, I can't wait to read more!