Your AN made me chuckle. I did like the story, but then again, I didn't have to write it, so my opinion doesn't count for much. ;) There was extra information not relevant to the case that I suppose came from plot changes, but came off as a convoluted case. I enjoyed reading it, at the least, and Sherlock wanting to play at the end made me smile. ;)

Im in sseventh grade french... i can help a bit.

Unfortunately I have to agree that you have written better. Fortunately I don't think it was a waste of my time to read it. I still love your plots and all of the details you include. A little more polishing and I think you'll have it. I look forward to reading the rest of your stories.

I like twist of a murder at the end of the chapter. I appreciate the translation from French. Towards the top, you have Pascal saying something, but he's not there. I think it's supposed to be Guy talking.

Excellent dialogue, so in character. Sherlock isn't always rude and mean in the show, which some fics misrepresent, and some purposely make him overly nice and vulnerable, but you have the balance just right. The banter was fantastic. My favourite line was "You've got fish on your back" - perfect comedy timing. The only line I would've changed was the bit about the violin. Love the idea, but I can see Sherlock "offering his services" to replace the missing violin rather than making a request. John would see through it of course. I love how you write some of your stories with an actual plotline I can get into too, enjoy long stories so much more. Thanks for a good read.

Somehow, you managed to work the bikes in. Wowzers!

XOXOXO

I agree that this isn't you're best work, but it's still not bad. The plot's intriguing and I think it's worth a rewrite.

-Allie

Actually, I really enjoy reading this one.

Just broke the computer "a bit" huh? :D Sounds like more than "a bit." :P

Can't wait for the next chapter!

I know you don't want us saying this fic is great when you think it's not, but I actually did like it very much. I think, though, that the last two chapters and the resolution of the case were a bit rushed. I think you gave us lots of details about the characters and their relationships that in the end, like Sherlock himself said, turned out to be irrelevant. Even so, I believe it still has a lot of potential and I'm eager to read it again once you've edited it. Don't feel bad about it, it's been fun and enjoyable so far. :D Thanks for sharing.

LOL

You are a riot. it's not as bad as you think. It's not even bad. ;_

Interesting

Another excellent chapter, Pip. I have no idea what's going on, so you're definitely doing your job right!

I like this fic very, very much. I'm also really curious and eager to read more, heh! I'd write a longer review, but I'm almost falling asleep as I write this, so goodnight and keep on the good work! :}

Uh-oh, they're in trouble. :D

Excellent chapter! I love the conversations between Sherlock and John. You capture that relationship well!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Really enjoying this, though it took a shamefully long time for me to suss which story you were rebooting. *face-palm*