Good job! I read this because Loafer mentioned it and I'm glad I did. :)

I prefer Shawn/Juliet and Lassiter/Marlowe, but this was an unbelievably amazing story.

Never stop writing.

I have nothing constructive to say.

I can only squee.

Exciting and sweet and romantic and wonderful. Thanks so much for sharing this. :)

K

I really enjoyed it - you managed to make the two of them work well together without anything seeming too contrived or breaking character, which is tricky when you're trying to work with Lassie and emotions!

This was a really remarkable story and I've read it several times (and recommended it to others).

You captured the characters well and I loved the understated way in which you described what happened and how they reacted to each other. Reminded me of Holes by Louis Sachar - same quiet and compelling delivery.

Bravo! Now more Lassiet, please. :-)

Love this story. Thanks for sharing.

I love it! I really, really love it. It's just well-written and all around great. :)

I really liked this story. You did a great job with these characters, and I'd love to see you write them again!

Fantastic! You said so much in so few words. Pitch perfect.

Yay, for Lassiet fic. There is not nearly enough of it, imo. This was quite good. :)

Although I find the set-up of your story a little far-fetched, I like how it makes the transition from partners to lovers more plausible than most Lassiter/Juliet fanfics (or any story involving police partners, really). I also like how they don't get along at first, because the transition, realistically, should be awkward. Moreover, I think you capture both characters well, even if some of the POV changes are a bit jarring at times. This story might have benefited from a beta reader, in that respect.

Overall, though, I like how you write this dynamic and hope that you continue to post more Lass/Jules. Fandom could certainly use more of this pairing. By the way, since I see from your profile that you are on Livejournal, you might want to link to this and your other Carlton/Jules story on their LJ shipper community: lassiter_juliet

You would probably find greater readership that way.

I very much enjoyed the friendship turned intimacy dynamic that your story had.

Those two are priceless. They are so perfect for each other. I loved this fic. :)

Loved it. Very sweet and in character.