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WhyWouldYouWriteThat
8/23/11 . chapter 1
"Gary cried himself to sleep that night."

This phrase kept me laughing for hours, seriously change it or remove it from the fic or everyone would think about Forever Alone meme, laugh and ruin the fic like what happened to me.

FOREVER GARY OAK
1 Litre of Tears Sakura
1/2/04 . chapter 1
Hey, cool story. Mind reading my fic, Anywhere But Here? Please?
Nadia Jones
11/2/03 . chapter 1
I loved it. I have no bother or sister but I know that Ash said the right thing to Gary. Email me.
Alex Warlorn
4/16/01 . chapter 1
You did a good job on this fan fic, I didn't say enough the last time, so I

I'll say it now, characters are real, atmosphere is felt, detail is lacking and is a slight confusion.

LOVED IT. So tragic. I'm glade to find another pok'e mon who knows about May's existance.
Alchemy
11/28/00 . chapter 1
sniff
Psychotic Pikachu
11/3/00 . chapter 1
Yeah, those Yaoi fics never seem too realistic, I'm glad you all liked it (Gary's my favorite charecter)
sandshrew
10/2/00 . chapter 1
This is very good. Not often do I find anything with Gary where he isn't an enemy. Very realistic and touching.
Wow
9/5/00 . chapter 1
Well written and realistic, I'm impressed :)
Meredith
9/5/00 . chapter 1
I never like Gary fics, but I like this one... that says a lot.
S.Gina
9/5/00 . chapter 1
there should be more gary-shows-his-sensitive-side stories! YES!
Zarla
9/4/00 . chapter 1
How cute! ^_^
Gryphon
9/4/00 . chapter 1
Finally...another Ash/Gary reconciliation fic that *wasn't* a m/m slash fic...and a good story to boot!
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